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It makes the world turn sweet

Contributed by mia on Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 05:50:37 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

He sat in his bedroom, in the dark
Taking the stuff his friend said was good
He felt good when he hurt himself so harmfully

His folks had no idea

Taking knifes into his hands
Yelling at the top of his lungs
"Not how my life is"
HE YELLED, HE YELLED.

As passers by looked on in the street
The police had there guns
The ambulance stood by
To watch a young boy, a boy who had his life
Cry and scream was so sad

"I sat at night, cryed so loud, mum never heard me, dad was always gone"
He said, his folks were watching as his mum was broken down
His dad was on a business trip
Not knowing what his son was doing

As he held that knife in the air
"I hate the world today"

He grabbed that knife and was never to wake again
His tears that was warm rolled down his face
Everyone was in shock
there baby son was gone now & the tears were turned cold

It was a sad life for this young boy
who thought hurting would be great
That was not the case
All alone

Copyright © mia ... [ 2005-05-18 05:50:37]
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Re: It makes the world turn sweet (User Rating: 1 )
by nannerz on Thursday, 17th November 2005 @ 09:30:08 PM AEST
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hmmm intersting write i like it keep em coming

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