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I Hate You
Contributed by
Yuri
on
Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 11:55:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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You stupid, lying
scheming *****
I hate you so much
you evil witch
I swear I can't stand you
I swear on my life
You betrayed me so quickly
stabbed through me like a scythe
You've no reason to live
no not for me
You know that I hate you
that's what you should see
You belittling liar
I loathe what you stand for
You live for those lies
is your life such a bore?
I don't think i've ever felt such hate
I know this is true
for what I am saying
Is that I HATE YOU
Copyright ©
Yuri
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2005-05-17 23:55:31]
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Re: I Hate You
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by poet70 on
Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 12:50:44 AM AEST
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Good hateful poem, hope you felt better after writing it? Sorry that you are carrying all that hate tho, it can't be good to feel all that hate, but any ways, glad you could put it down on paper, and maybe it helped you feel better. good enotional writing, keep it up.
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Re: I Hate You
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by mia on
Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 06:01:18 AM AEST
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| Great poem, You let go alot of anger? I always do when i write about a certain someone, I hope all works out fine for you |
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Re: I Hate You
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by nick_is_no_poet on
Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 08:00:27 AM AEST
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| ya poems good and consitancy is good with i "hate you" but watch the flow and speed....good all around though |
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Re: I Hate You
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by Yuri on
Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 01:41:03 AM AEST
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| Thnx and it did make me feel better but I'm still ***** at this girl. What she did was completely unforgivable. I've been known to hold grudges. |
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Re: I Hate You
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 14th March 2007 @ 10:50:25 PM AEST
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| I had a friend who takes advantage of me so I feel for you. Great write though! |
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