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Togetherness
Contributed by
freckle
on
Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 10:30:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Togetherness
Morning dawns silently
upon your sleeping body
And I see you shiver
in your sleep
I want to move closer and hold you
but instead I get up quietly
I stir last night's smouldering embers
with a broken twig
The twig is small and frail,
I think of you
For even though to others,
you are strong and sturdy
I know that you are soft, tender, loving,
and yes, weak, in reality
I move back to our faded blankets
in a turmoil on the ground
In the midst of them is your body
moving softly with your breathing
I lie down next to you
and embrace you in a pleasant hug
You stir slightly and move closer
to my thrilled body
Then your comforting arms reach up
and feel my face
You giggle teasingly and turn
to look at me
Your eyes caress my feelings for you
and we move closer together
I kiss you and your lips
fill me with unending pleasure
You move closer to me
and I feel your body against mine
Then we both move together and become one
in the early morning wilderness.
Carol
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2005-05-17 22:30:29]
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Re: Togetherness
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by Poetryanimal on
Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 10:56:30 PM AEST
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This was quite tender in an erotic sort of way.
Good write... |
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Re: Togetherness
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 01:43:09 AM AEST
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I wouldn't have known that u r were just 16 as this is written very well.
Good work.
huggs,
emy |
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