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Can't I just cry?
Contributed by
midnightwriter
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Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 09:53:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Can’t I just cry, can’t I just sit here and try?
Do I have to keep it all in, all this grief and sin?
Why do I have to let it harden inside my soul, why can’t I just pour it all out in a bowl?
Why do I always have to pretend it doesn’t hurt, can’t I just sob and blurt it out.
I thought people care about people, but everyone abandons me when I’m most feeble.
This midnight writer was once whole, but the evils in life have taken their toll.
Can’t I just cry and lay my head on a caring friends shoulder, why is it they always offer me a boulder.
Why should I cry? No one can see, not one person cares about my misery.
I’m internally drowning in my tears; I guess I have to just keep on hiding my deepest fears.
Hope you all don’t get concerned, you won’t hear about my suicide confirmed.
I’ll just try to cry myself to sleep tonight, and try to keep up with life’s fight.
So pray for me tonight as I’m trying to find sleep here in the middle of the night.
Maybe as your praying and asking the good Lord my soul to keep, that you’ll remember me in your prayers and ask God to help me cry myself to sleep.
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2005-05-17 21:53:56]
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Re: Can't I just cry?
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 09:59:16 PM AEST
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Wow, this is sad but well said.
I will put u in my prayers and keep u there.
I'll be gone after tonite a few days but u can p.m. me anytime.
Hang in there as I know the feelings.
U r not alone my friend 'cause we all go where u r now from time to time.
luv, huggs, prayers,
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Re: Can't I just cry?
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 09:59:27 PM AEST
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well I dont know about anyone else but you can cry infact we can cry together Im going to get the tissues right now argggg we are all having one of those nights I guess this is heartfelt and reaches out so sadly
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Re: Can't I just cry?
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by heartless_soul on
Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 10:21:22 PM AEST
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I know what you are talking about allk to well, it does hurt not being able to mcry and not having anyone there makes it all the harder to deal with, jusy know that if you need to cry on a shoulder you can have mine(on this site, here you can talk to me if you need toand if not me then everyone elas is also willoing to help. just ask.) and I will pray for you to get better and hope that yoiu will find Him your comforter. Be well.
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Re: Can't I just cry?
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by Sahara on
Thursday, 19th May 2005 @ 08:12:53 AM AEST
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Very powerful, and well put.... By all mean cry sweetheart when you need a release or just to vent.... and if ever you need a shoulder to cry upon I'm here. I know that we don't know one another but if ever you just need an ear or a shoulder I'm here.
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Re: Can't I just cry?
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by freckle on
Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 08:43:04 PM AEST
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What a sad write. I hope things are better for you now. There are dark days in the lives of many...hang in there. People do care, you just have to find the right people. Thanks for sharing this write.
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Re: Can't I just cry?
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by deathbringer on
Thursday, 24th November 2005 @ 11:43:52 PM AEST
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| Everybody has his/her bad day only others feel it more intense and heartbraking.It's in humans "source code" to suffer and to rely on others in times of ill like this.I know it's kinda late for support but here no one's hated and if u want u'll get all the comfort u need.You just have to ask. |
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