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I Am Dead
Contributed by
sinned
on
Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 09:18:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Lightning against the black sky
Stones tilting helter skelter
Tree leaves wind striped of life
Soaked somewhere left to dry
Thunder rattles the heaven
Booming echoes between the stones
No rest for the dead
Worms float on pavement
Muddy water soaks the ground
Flower pettles plastic and real
Scurring across a stone covered
pasture
That horrible dripping in my tomb
The constant driping a continuled taunt
Within this vault my casket lies
On my back facing up
Evil spirits me reason to haunt
Here I lie year after year
My flesh had been eaten away
Pieces of clothes and my rotting
bones
Worms craw in worms craw out my sockets ware
I have seen demons from hell
I cannot plead I need your prayer
A day is like a thousand years
Demons come from the under world
Teasing teasing always screeching
I am dead they tempt no more
Gnawing taring at whatevers left
Up above still the raining
Blown flowers cover the earth
Plastic and real
No one knows what goes on below
My bones scattered in this muddy filth
How long have I lied in wait
Pray you for my soul
A thousand years is but a day
Judgement day I wish to be at His gate
Sinned
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2005-05-17 21:18:36]
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Re: I Am Dead
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 02:50:26 AM AEST
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Great writing as always.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: I Am Dead
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by mina-1 on
Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 06:27:30 AM AEST
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Dennis this is a thought provoking piece of poetry captured so well with ur talented skill in writing. A truly remarkable poem .
*hugs*
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Re: I Am Dead
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by Gimpie on
Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 03:02:53 PM AEST
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wow....this is really thought provoking....I love it. You are really good at capturing things in your writing...I can't wait to read more from you :)
Your friend,
Jes |
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Re: I Am Dead
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Tuesday, 24th May 2005 @ 12:04:16 PM AEST
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well written and very good. great job. I liked it.
christina |
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Re: I Am Dead
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 13th June 2005 @ 12:45:25 AM AEST
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Ha! A wonderful write. Your words captured my attention and grasped my emotions.
Excellent as always.
Keep writing
Keep smiling
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