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Children of the Stars
Contributed by
Rakerman1999
on
Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 09:12:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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Down in green and fertile valleys
Past the rivers running wild
'Neath the shadows of the mountains
I have walked with nature's child
Under skies of purest blue
Through the fields kissed by the sun
With the innocence of youth
There in bare feet we have run
Raven hair blown by the wind
Hear her laughter in the breeze
Like a song sent from the Gods
From across the placid seas
Spirits free and still untamed
Bearing not the worldly scars
We are brethren to the moon
We are children of the stars
L. Carling c2005
Copyright ©
Rakerman1999
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2005-05-17 21:12:13]
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Re: Children of the Stars
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by waos on
Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 09:14:21 PM AEST
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That was gorgeous in my humble opinion. The beautiful connections
you made between nature and people, and the innocence I felt in it.
Your word choice really made this poem... awesome work, I loved
reading it!
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Re: Children of the Stars
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by OnAngelswings on
Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 09:16:38 PM AEST
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| What can I say...another beautifully written poem...you could just be one of the worlds natural wonders...Shari :) |
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Re: Children of the Stars
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by ForeverAlone on
Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 09:21:05 PM AEST
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Larry, I just love the way this is written, SO Beautiful and outstanding....Just wow...What a talent..As always
~Clark |
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Re: Children of the Stars
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 09:22:33 PM AEST
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Iv missed you Larry glad I saw this though as always its a masterpiece a jewel in this desert of mine to read awwwwww
hugsssss
Michelle |
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Re: Children of the Stars
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 10:16:49 PM AEST
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This is outstanding what beauty and innocence it has.
Leia |
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Re: Children of the Stars
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by Man_On_High on
Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 10:22:56 PM AEST
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"Spirits free and still untamed
Bearing not the worldly scars
We are brethren to the moon
We are children of the stars"
amazing...it speaks for itself...
I didnt want it to end
very very well written..
M.O.H.
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Re: Children of the Stars
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by MorningDove on
Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 11:10:39 PM AEST
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Such fluidity. I wish we all still had the innocence of children playing freely with each other, not knowing of hate or bigotry or race. children of the universe with the loving protective mother guiding us. I wish ...
Hugs,
Rita |
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Re: Children of the Stars
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by bobotheclown on
Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 01:44:52 AM AEST
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Beautiful poem Larry I was wondering when
you would post another one. I loved the
images in this poem it was just perfection
and I was left hungering for more.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Children of the Stars
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by blowfish_jane on
Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 02:47:02 AM AEST
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Larry this was just outstanding. A well written piece like always expected from you.
Great write as always.
Jane xxx |
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Re: Children of the Stars
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 03:01:48 AM AEST
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Such an awesomely beautifull write.
huggs, smiles,
emy
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Re: Children of the Stars
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by DorianChambers on
Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 12:58:28 PM AEST
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Beautiful as always oh and thank u, u taught me somthing the 'neath wit tha apostufie i'm learning alot from people on here 2 write better more correctly keep up the good work,
yo barkeep 4get the apple a whole bottle 4 my teacher . . .
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Re: Children of the Stars
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by sweetangeluk on
Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 02:35:46 PM AEST
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Filled with purity and beauty
Full of sweetness and light
Beautiful
Love Angelxxxxx |
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Re: Children of the Stars
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by Merry on
Friday, 20th May 2005 @ 06:47:07 PM AEST
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Love this one Larry - has a very 60's kinda flow to it - flower child and all that stuff - hahaha well now I'm giving my age away hahaha. Keep up the great writing.
Daisies dude!!!!
merry |
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Re: Children of the Stars
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by Silent-No-More on
Sunday, 22nd May 2005 @ 04:01:47 PM AEST
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Exquisite, Larry! This really grabbed me. I have to confess... I've been here a few times before... read this, at least a dozen... and still... don't think I can adequate convey what it is about this that tugs at me so.
Carried away by this,
~Snem~
(who has some catching up to do)
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