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I wanted something
Contributed by
orangemen566
on
Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 08:28:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I wanted to love you,
I wanted to have you,
I wanted to be with you,
Yah I wanted some stuff,
You tell me you love me,
But do you really mean it,
I used to think I meant a lot to you,
Evidentally..well I don't,
I love you,
I have you,
I will be with you,
But do you want the same from me,
You kan never be with me,
You say you want to,
But you never kan,
Am I so cold,
To where you kan't even talk to me,
Am I so hated,
To where you kan't even love me,
Am I a failure,
A failure of you,
I'm sorry for wat I did,
I love you with EVERYTHING I've got,
I would do anything for you,
If you died,
I'd die too,
If you were shot,
I'd be wounded,
You cry,
I cry,
You hurt,
I hurt,
I will ALWAYS be here for you,
Please don't ever forget that,
I love you forever and always.
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orangemen566
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2005-05-17 20:28:56]
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Re: I wanted something
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 08:32:36 PM AEST
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| sounds like someone is lucky to have you near nicely done |
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Re: I wanted something
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by Nomad062303 on
Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 08:35:21 PM AEST
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| sounds good, its hard to find a love that strong. |
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Re: I wanted something
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by dthwlkr on
Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 11:26:08 PM AEST
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this is really nice,emotions have been portrayed nicely,i can almost visualise it its a very gud write definitely 4 on 5
KEEP WRITING |
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