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Alone in a Crowd
Contributed by
sir_odd87
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Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 07:27:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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I left my class
And headed for my locker
But I was stopped,
About six people away
As that's how thick the crowd was
Swarming around my locker
Like a hive full of bees,
Pushing to talk to
The queens on either side.
There I stand,
Ignored by all
Alone in the crowd.
I stand there,
In a crowd,
Yet all alone,
With everyone,
But without anyone.
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2005-05-17 19:27:58]
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Re: Alone in a Crowd
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 07:31:50 PM AEST
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| And they say highschool years are the golden years... |
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Re: Alone in a Crowd
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by waos on
Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 09:24:55 PM AEST
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That wasn't too bad. I know how you feel. I never am sure whether to be
***** off or just be thankful that I'm not them :p. It's weird.
Nice work putting this idea onto paper. Keep it up.
~Kara |
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Re: Alone in a Crowd
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by mazeof_darkness on
Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 10:24:31 PM AEST
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It sucks to be alone, But if this poem is as i think it's meant to be taken,
I found out that even though it sucks, trust me, it is you that are the understanding that all those others are yet to learn. Stay strong! |
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Re: Alone in a Crowd
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by Pyrofungus on
Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 11:01:29 AM AEST
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not bad. that's never happen to me, but i know what it feels like to "all alone,
With everyone,
But without anyone."
summer |
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