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The Kiss
Contributed by
sir_odd87
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Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 06:49:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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Around eleven thirty.
October, two years ago.
The night of homecoming
We'd danced all the slow ones
You were so beautiful
Your make up was a little smudged
From leaning on my shoulder
The dance was over,
But our ride wasn't there yet.
We sat together on the bench
And watched as everybody left.
I checked my watch,
I looked at you,
I told you you looked pretty.
I think you blushed,
But that COULD
Have been the make up.
I swallowed, HARD,
And leaned in close to you.
I sucked it up,
Got up my nerve,
And asked if I could kiss you.
I had kissed your cheek before,
But was yet to taste your lips.
You thought,
For all too long a moment.
You finally agreed,
And I slowly leaned closer.
It was only our first kiss
So it was far too short.
It was like the Christmas of a lifetime
So anticipated, and over so soon.
But oh, it was so good.
Her lips were sweeter than sugar
Since that night,
We've kissed a couple times or so,
And her lips have only gotten sweeter,
Since that first.
What a kiss!
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sir_odd87
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2005-05-17 18:49:45]
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Re: The Kiss
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 06:52:54 PM AEST
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| It sounds like it....very nicely written |
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Re: The Kiss
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 24th May 2005 @ 10:31:00 PM AEST
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| Awww....so sweet! |
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Re: The Kiss
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by Fionndruinne on
Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 05:06:31 PM AEST
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Rather well done, I think. I liked this line;
It was like the Christmas of a lifetime.
Keep writing. You are improving.
Andrew |
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