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Comment Lament
Contributed by
CodyJ
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Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 06:22:09 PM in AEST
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This raging torrent of pleading wishes
is a sad comment lament.
If you read, comment,
so I know that what went
through your head
was more than idle thoughts
of this week's rent,
or if you sent
a thank you note the other day.
But if idle thoughts you indeed do have,
then my work must be terribly bad.
For if I can't make you feel,
feel a little glad,
that special kinda sad
from getting to relate,
then maybe I wasn't great.
In that case,
please just pass me by.
I won't cry
over words you wouldn't have meant,
a few words to cure your conscience,
a mediocre vent.
So if you don't feel from a poem,
can't get into the way it flows,
ignore the author's notes,
leave it as a lesson to change.
And for the love of Mick,
don't comment.
Copyright ©
CodyJ
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2005-05-17 18:22:09]
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Re: Comment Lament
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by bethers_is_my_baby on
Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 06:41:51 PM AEST
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| nice job!! its cute!!! |
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Re: Comment Lament
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 02:25:07 AM AEST
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I hear ya.
Very good writing.
This isn't directed to any one in particular. What gets to me is people won't comments but they don't have the curtacy to comment in return.
You're a good writer and doon't let any one tell u any thing different.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Comment Lament
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 20th November 2005 @ 11:55:19 PM AEST
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| and i have thought the same. excellent ending, quite the twist. your poems certainly were always worth the reading, even though i seemed to never read them as much as i could have. |
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