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lost
Contributed by
andiD
on
Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 05:10:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
self-harmpoetry
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The blade is so sharp, it sends tingles up my spine
I'm going to take this worthless life of mine
THe time has come to leave the world behind
to be alone again with darkness devine.
Why should I live when all I feel is pain,,
nothing can dim it not even drowning in the rain
Oh pitiful me is what they all say, but what they
will all live to see is the dawning of a new day.
Good bye I say to my family and friends,
Good bye because I will never see you again.
Copyright ©
andiD
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2005-05-17 17:10:42]
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Re: lost
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by Stonedraider23 on
Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 06:46:39 PM AEST
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| not bad but how could this offend anyone it u thats dying lol |
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Re: lost
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by blue_angel on
Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 08:14:38 PM AEST
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gosh thats so sad... but powerful and wonderfully written all the more. i can totally relate to this, i hope all is well. i will keep you in my thoughts,
luv n hugs,
jennie* |
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Re: lost
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by Sad-one on
Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 11:49:07 PM AEST
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it sure didnt offend me. It did bring back some horrid memories though. im a cutter so its kinda touching. Keep Writing!
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