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My Sweet Boy
Contributed by
Vampy
on
Monday, 30th December 2002 @ 08:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Every day,
I fall for you
all over again.
Each time
your voice says
"I love you",
I melt.
Your face still brings
me smiles,
your soft touch still
pleases me.
You're my comfort,
my light,
my perfect someone.
Our love is sincere
and grows stronger
day by day.
Your sweet Edward* smile
makes me grin,
and puts love
into my heart.
You make me feel complete,
and I realize
that without you,
my life would be bleak.
*Edward Scissorhands
Copyright ©
Vampy
... [
2002-12-30 20:40:00]
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Re: My Sweet Boy
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by emystar on
Monday, 30th December 2002 @ 09:08:33 PM AEST
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so sweeeeeettttt!
Ain't luv grande?
Good write.
PEACE, LUV, JOY,
emy |
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Re: My Sweet Boy
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by MoonlitAngel on
Monday, 30th December 2002 @ 09:36:40 PM AEST
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How sweet! I love the first stanza. Just the idea of falling for someone all over again every day...what a feeling! Excellent write!
~ MoonlitAngel |
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