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Fate of a poetic knight
Contributed by
DanishPoet
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Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 03:47:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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The Honor of the knight, the only thing that my heart has gained.
With the honor of my heart, I can never give up.
The tears of a poet, from those the paper now is stained.
With the broken heart of mine, the pain will never stop.
I just won't quit because of a "no", not even if it kills me.
Foolish knight! Some pain brings no gain.
Only one thing can ever heal me, that one thing is she.
Teller of tales, I'm the one who suffer the pain.
People tells me to move on and grow up.
"If your only regret was, not to keep going,
I ask of thee, would you ever stop?"
"No..." they say, while secretly my pain is growing.
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DanishPoet
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2005-05-17 15:47:17]
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Re: Fate of a poetic knight
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by Man_On_High on
Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 08:12:40 PM AEST
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good write
I liked it.
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Re: Fate of a poetic knight
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Thursday, 10th November 2005 @ 06:38:07 PM AEST
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This was a very well written piece of poetry. I like your style of writing, very heartfelt and deep. Well done and keep penning.
*hugs*
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Re: Fate of a poetic knight
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by ceazer2005 on
Thursday, 10th November 2005 @ 11:56:28 PM AEST
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| awesome poem |
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Re: Fate of a poetic knight
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by vox on
Saturday, 19th November 2005 @ 04:55:01 PM AEST
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| nice poem. great little story. nicely written. beautiful. |
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