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A love like lemon sour
Contributed by
In_a_While
on
Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 01:25:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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we are this red rose flower
dying in my hand
a love like lemon sour
barren fruitless land
i feel thorns now stinging
with drops of red no taste
the stem is slowly bringing
leaves to winter waste
i pull a petal to see
if she's behind a fold
my sight now swims so free
as tears do flood too cold
i drop this red rose flower
with withered calloused hand
no tongue to taste the sour
cause words don't understand...
dw
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2005-05-17 13:25:22]
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Re: A love like lemon sour
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by recklessguy on
Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 01:33:17 PM AEST
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| oh I hear this one and feel it also damn sour taste sucks. The awfuil feeling of knowing you wont hold her in your arms oh I know man believe me |
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Re: A love like lemon sour
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by bethie on
Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 02:15:55 PM AEST
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| Very lovely. Thanks. |
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Re: A love like lemon sour
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by sride686 on
Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 10:44:12 AM AEST
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| Wow if losing love is bad it didn’t show in this write. Well it was sad and I can see the pain but it was a assume write and it was written so well. You had a great choice of vocabulary in this write and it was worded so well. I really do like your writes and I wish you got more reads and comments because you deserve them my friend. Take care…Steve |
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