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Ended
Contributed by
Supergurl1071
on
Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 01:11:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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This black hole I wake up everyday in
this silent void that nobody can see into
I live through it everyday, my world dark and gray
and no one understands it
No one sees what I go through each day
this chasm of thoughts that kill me
for no apparent reason I feel so alone
and push everyone else away
I feel worthless and like no one cares
and maybe it would be better if I just ended it
if I end all this and not have to pretend
and wear this mask of a happy face
So that nobody knows what’s on the inside
that I’m dying in my own soul in this black world
and no one can see what is in front of me
would it all be so bad if it ended
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Supergurl1071
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2005-05-17 13:11:53]
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Re: Ended
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by poet70 on
Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 02:52:32 PM AEST
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You are not alone, there is so many people suffering depression, ( I for one) and have walked that road, or lived that way for awhile, but thank goodness there is help out there if a person is able and willing to go for it.
This was a very expressive poem, brought me back to my darken days when I felt just like this, great writing, But killing oneself is NEVER THE ANSWER.
Tammi |
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Re: Ended
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by Supergurl1071 on
Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 05:31:23 PM AEST
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| Half of these poems are from the days when I did suffer from depression, I've since gotten help... luckily I stuck around to get it. I'm always grateful that I never went through with my thoughts of suicide and I can tell you it does get better, but as people have said before, suicide is NOT the answer. Get help, it's not embaressing and it doesn't make you any less of a person and believe me, people will understand. Much love. |
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