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I dont wanna need your help

Contributed by bethers_is_my_baby on Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 12:07:09 PM in AEST
Topic: self-harmpoetry



i pick up my razor blade again
knowing it is my only true friend
its ben a while i say to it
but still, in my hand you fit.

ive ben hurting,
where have you ben?
are you still sharp?
i say to him

i know my arm
is just starting to heal
but things are too rough
i can no longer deal

i know you understand
you always do.
you help me
when im feeling blue.

so just hold your breath
it wont take long
just close your eyes
and prey till im done

ill drag you slowly
across my skin
releasing the pain
i feel within

with every drop
of blood that falls
i losen up my grip

till finally
i stop the cutting
and clean up all the mess

now see,
that wasnt really that bad.
it didnt even really hurt

and look,
there isnt that much blood
nothing to worry about.

it was nice to see you again,
i said to it.
thank you for your help.
but hopefully this is the last time
i use you to hurt myself.



Copyright ©2005 Amanda Hope Indelicato




Copyright © bethers_is_my_baby ... [ 2005-05-17 12:07:09]
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Re: I dont wanna need your help (User Rating: 1 )
by Moshi_Moshi on Thursday, 19th May 2005 @ 04:22:05 PM AEST
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Great Poem! You really captured how you felt.


Re: I dont wanna need your help (User Rating: 1 )
by Sad-one on Friday, 10th June 2005 @ 12:06:31 AM AEST
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UNFORTUNATLY, i can truly relate, because i am a cutter and i feel exactly that way towards my razor blade. its good to know that i can come to a site like this and see an ezcellent writer like you express your feelings through poetry.Keep Writing!

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