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HOW
Contributed by
chefhmboyrd
on
Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 11:30:13 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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How is it when I look at you, I melt inside like warm ghee
How is it when your eyes meet mine, my heart stops and I can’t breathe
How is it when your lips touch mine, butterflies swirl round inside me
How is it when I touch you, you are all I see
How can I show you, my love, that we will never part
How can I make you trust me, when we stumbled from the start
How can I make you believe me, when you can’t trust your heart
How can I be your only love, when you are torn apart
How can we make it, when we can’t take it anymore
How can we fix it, if we can not close the door
How can we be together, with shadows on the floor
How can we get past this, and be happy evermore
How can you be assured, that I will always stay
How can you be sure, my love will never fade away
How can you be happy, when you hurt most every day
How can you let me love you, please let us find a way
How will you know my love is true, only time will tell
How will I know you love me too, only time will tell
How will you learn to believe in us, only time will tell
How will this turn out, in the end, only time will tell
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2005-05-17 11:30:13]
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Re: HOW
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by poet70 on
Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 03:00:07 PM AEST
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| WOW! This was a long poem, and I know you have the means to write some pretty awesome poems, don't get mad, but I don't feel this one is your better one, TO MUCH RYMING, keep trying, less ryming. |
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Re: HOW
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by Wolfareen on
Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 04:16:33 PM AEST
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| Oh no, I don't agree with poet70. I liked this one. I thought it really flowed and showed how you felt; beautiful. There you are Chef, I said I'd review for you lol. |
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