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this is my goodbye
Contributed by
brokenwings
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Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 04:52:31 AM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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I have made up my mind
and nothing more for you to find
so don't search for me i am gone
and love in my heart i have none
packed up all my things and i am leaving
i have no more reasons to stay here
momma told me go get you life clear
no don't say i am fleeing
i dont see no healing if i stay
since you walked away
i gave you every ounce of my love unending
i gave you every ounce of my trust depleting
life here has no meaning
so this is why i am leaving
dont search for me in this town
don't worry you let me down
my love is gone
my heart is empty
my life here is over
this is my good bye to you
one who loved me and left me blue
not one tear will i cry
as this is my goodbye
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Re: this is my goodbye
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by Sinned on
Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 05:20:19 AM AEST
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Brokenwings
This is a sorry tell. So sad. I wish you well.
You may run,but you can't hide.
Feelings stay deep inside.
In time they will fade.
You will have happier days.
Remember if you can,
There is not a woman that needs a man.
I speak to you as a caring friend.
Sinned |
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Re: this is my goodbye
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by EverlastingDawn on
Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 05:40:09 AM AEST
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Interesting poem
I hope things get better for you
Good luck in rediscovering yourself
Nice Write
~Dawn |
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Re: this is my goodbye
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 07:48:25 AM AEST
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Great write! i hope things get better for you! good luck.
hugsssssssss . |
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Re: this is my goodbye
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by blowfish_jane on
Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 08:20:04 AM AEST
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A sad write showing so much emotion and sadness. Hope everything goes well with you.
Jane xxx |
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Re: this is my goodbye
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by Nomad062303 on
Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 09:33:32 AM AEST
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| i like this... i love it. so expressive, and the sequence. This is really inspiring |
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Re: this is my goodbye
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by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 11:02:19 AM AEST
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This was a really good poem...I especially like the line "I gave you every ounce of my trust depleting..." I hope you find much happiness in your new surroundings...
Scorp. |
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Re: this is my goodbye
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 12:44:39 PM AEST
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very sad but full of hope sometimes picking up and making a move is the best thing for the soul and new change breaths life back into things.I wish you luck on your journies
Michelle |
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Re: this is my goodbye
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by lovingcritters on
Thursday, 19th May 2005 @ 10:02:42 PM AEST
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Tasha, this is another sad write.
But sometimes picking up and going to a different place can you help you to forget the past, and remember :"Variety is the Spice of Life........I hope you find whatever it is you are looking for.
This was a great poem for your reasons, and I felt your forlorning greatly.
Hugs to you
And Warm Love
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