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Beast Of Rage
Contributed by
Eternal_Darkness
on
Monday, 22nd July 2002 @ 07:16:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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She fell into the waves
A slow chill gathered
As death crept into her mind
The waves crashed and boomed
Shudders rippled down her spine
A muffled snap
Then all was silent
As blood whirled around her
High pitched squeals
A splitting crack was all I heard
Before the shadow vanished
Copyright ©
Eternal_Darkness
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2002-07-22 19:16:45]
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Re: Beast Of Rage
(User Rating: 1 )
by Jackee_line on
Friday, 22nd November 2002 @ 02:29:22 AM AEST
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| nice write |
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Re: Beast Of Rage
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 10th January 2003 @ 12:15:53 AM AEST
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| Very moving and strong poem.. love the last line.. packs a punch! |
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