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Hush, my Love
Contributed by
bobotheclown
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Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 12:53:50 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Hush, my love do not cry
I only want your finger
(The one with the big rock)
As a trophy for my collection
And perhaps I will take your middle finger
The one waving in my face
You are beautiful my darling
I love to gaze into your eyes
And drink in the fear depicted there
It is lovely and sustains me
Through my darkest hours
Your naked body awakens
No thoughts of lust within me
(Although I could offer you far more
Than you executive husband
And your 10 yr.old son (lover))
I just love seeing the fear
In your green eyes
When I tie you down
And take off your clothes
I mull over the words
"You cannot rape the willing,"
But I see no willingness in your eyes
Only fear and you will be mine
As long as fear glimmers there
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Re: Hush, my Love
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 01:38:17 AM AEST
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whoawww you gave me chills with this one Joel its great as usual though. Nice to see you back thought you left here for good
Michelle |
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Re: Hush, my Love
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 06:09:56 AM AEST
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Wow!!! Speechless!!!!
('Cept to say...WELL DONE!"
Jenni |
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Re: Hush, my Love
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 06:27:41 AM AEST
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| hmmmmm...vengeance..have a nice time..;-) venkat |
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Re: Hush, my Love
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by blowfish_jane on
Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 08:50:39 AM AEST
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Ohhh now thats one bad arse poem. It's creepy but i loved it Joel.
well done as always.
Jane xx |
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Re: Hush, my Love
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by FleurdeSang on
Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 03:25:11 PM AEST
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............................ o.0 ................................
Holy ****!!!! Psychotic, indeed! Deliciously morbid, dark beauty, chilling till the very end!! LOVED IT!!! *Hugs for Joel* I admire your talent, cheri. Gruesome images... Quite inspiring, as a matter of fact. I'm off to write now! Be back soon. Merci beaucoup, cheri ami for this magnificent piece of twisted splendor!! All my love. Forever,
Your dear friend,
Stephy. (friggin' awesome, my friend!!) |
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Re: Hush, my Love
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 06:03:30 AM AEST
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O.O
Whoa... |
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Re: Hush, my Love
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by waos on
Thursday, 19th May 2005 @ 09:02:09 PM AEST
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Woah Joel. Woah. Frighten is a good work for it. I can hardly imagine
these thoughts coming from you. But, despite the gruesome topic and
painful images that surface...this is a 'good' poem if you know what I mean.
~Kara |
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Re: Hush, my Love
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 11:04:26 PM AEST
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| ::wide eyes:: one day joel i will listen to your description and believe you, but so far that isnt the case....lol. ::eyes still wide:: ::shakes head:: this was very good, and i cant believe i like it so much with the topic as it is. powerful ending and very very scary piece. ::still cant believe you wrote it:: |
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Re: Hush, my Love
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by emphaticplacebo on
Tuesday, 30th August 2005 @ 05:45:41 AM AEST
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Wow.. this is a very intense, somewhat twisted poem you have written. You have chosen an unorthodox idealogy and really made it your own, provoking vivid and dark thoughts. I really got into this poem and it only reinforces my views of your fabulous talent
Dan |
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Re: Hush, my Love
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by Broken-Suicide on
Sunday, 26th February 2006 @ 01:48:15 AM AEST
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| It doesnt make me fear...It only makes my lust after. Im enticed by it. You should have more maniac states. I think this is my favorite |
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