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you always did look pretty in red

Contributed by surge_joebot on Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 12:02:58 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Bang Bang (You Always Did Look Pretty In Red)

They caught me fleeing the scene.
Your blood on my hands.
Pointed his finger at me.
Claimed I murdered you.
You always did look pretty in blue...
You caught me leaving through the window
I said, "There are a few things you should know..."
You tried to grab my hand.
And our eyes met.
I said that I should go.

Heads were down.
Eyes were shut.
We Stand and we watch.

I shot you to the ground.
Bang bang.
I shot my baby to the ground.

You asked for my name.
You asked for the time.
You asked for a kiss.
I told you not tonight.

Breathed in...
Leaned in...
Beneath the street light.
You said that you would win.
But baby you didn't put up much of a fight.
I gave you a kiss.
With my fist...
As I squeezed the triggor tight...
Planted one right between your lips...

You bent over backwards...
And exposed your pretty hips.

Doll, your such a doll.
I said.
As I turned off the light switch.
I will dress you up in red.
Lying cold in your coffin, dead.

Copyright © surge_joebot ... [ 2005-05-17 00:02:58]
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Re: you always did look pretty in red (User Rating: 1 )
by grim6669 on Monday, 7th November 2005 @ 09:46:29 AM AEST
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WOW...I REALLY LIKE IT AND I FEEL ALL THE HATE AND IT'S JUST AMAZING HOW YOU MADE ME FEEL ALL THE EMOTION IN THIS ONE ...GOOD JOB...YOU SHOULD CHECK OUT MINE SOON...BYE BYE
*~AMBER~*

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