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Memories
Contributed by
Nomad062303
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Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 11:56:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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I heard those words and they tore me up inside,
If you would have told me from the beginning I would have never tried
Do you know how much it's hurting me?
Now because of your choice we can never be?
You actually swore that we would never be together again?
I find this out after my love for you transcends.
Now If I truly can't have you
I dont want to remember you
I dont want to say goodbye
Because my love for you will never die
But it breaks my heart to remember what we had
I want you so bad
But since I cant have you I have to forget
Almost as if we never met,
But I'm twisted because I cant be with you,
and cant live without having you.
Why did you have to do it?
That is something I will never get
Is that why you've been pushing me away?
Now you dont want to call everyday
I understand your reason why,
but please forgive him, and give me one more try...
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Re: Memories
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 12:04:20 AM AEST
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hey
very sad and great expressive poem.I understand how you feel,talk to her,win her heart all over again,if there was sure something,I bet a lot stood in her heart too :)
well,t/c and luck,doubt u'll need it tho,beacuse i bet she can see the love right through your eyes.......
love,
andrea |
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Re: Memories
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 01:36:28 AM AEST
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| very good ..expressive..i had similar lines for many days about my first love..thanks for sharing..venkat |
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Re: Memories
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by sride686 on
Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 01:26:36 PM AEST
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A very good write and you expressed your emotions so well in this piece. Thank you for sharing your heart with all of use that read this write. I can relate to this write and its hard to loss someone when they push you out of their life. My thoughts are with you take care….Steve
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