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A Kiss that lasts for ever, Feathers and Roses
Contributed by
Doriens_Picture
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Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 11:16:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
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2: A Kiss that lasts for ever
If I were
Kissing you I could
Kiss you for ever
I would not have to stop
Not for air not for anything
I would not want to
And you
You could just breathe
From my mouth so
That we would never have to
It could be
A kiss that lasts forever
1: Feathers and Roses
There are feathers and roses all over the room
The bed is full of them and it smells of cookies
But there is not one torn up pillow
And not broken glass
So no one had a pillow fight
And there is nothing in the room but the bed
So where did it all come from
You see something rise from the sheets
And it’s a girl with wings on top of a man
With long brown hair
Wow that explains a lot
I guess you can say he was in bed with an angel
An angel with the name of a bird
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Re: A Kiss that lasts for ever, Feathers and Roses
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by Gothchyk on
Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 12:04:51 AM AEST
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| Feathers and Roses-I love this one, and i'm sure that the kiss will be the sweetest one ever had. muaw |
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Re: A Kiss that lasts for ever, Feathers and Roses
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 12:04:55 AM AEST
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mmmmmmm Ben adorable bravo bravo take a bow my friend (Shall bats her lashes at Ben)
Michelle |
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Re: A Kiss that lasts for ever, Feathers and Roses
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 02:19:57 AM AEST
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lol whoops called you wrong name by mistake forgive me please
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Re: A Kiss that lasts for ever, Feathers and Roses
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by sweetangeluk on
Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 06:30:42 AM AEST
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Brushed with those feathers beautiful. And kisses so sweet.
Love Angelxxxx |
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Re: A Kiss that lasts for ever, Feathers and Roses
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Thursday, 19th May 2005 @ 10:25:41 PM AEST
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oh yes these r cute wow more than cute......wonderful
i love the thought of kissing ur love forever thats great and i especially enjoyed the poem Feathers and Roses...i am so glad you have found ur angel...well done
i LOVE ur poetry *BIG HUG* |
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Re: A Kiss that lasts for ever, Feathers and Roses
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by Gothchyk on
Saturday, 13th August 2011 @ 01:03:16 AM AEST
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| i still get chills when I read your poetry, you truly have a gift with words.... |
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