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You Let Me See Your Wings
Contributed by
Doriens_Picture
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Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 11:11:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Not in the whole world can there ever be
Anything or anyone
Like you
There’s nothing like you
You are the only one for me
And I am the only one for you
The one true love I know is you
The one perfect thing
The only thing that can make me whole
That has made me whole
And happy
In all my life nothing has ever come close
Till I met you
From day one
I knew it was you
Because you saw me for me
And you did not run away
Even though you were afraid
And unsure you did not run
And you trusted me
Little by little you trusted me with
All that you are
And I will never do anything to break that trust
It means more to me than anything has ever meant to anyone
That you chose to be my angel
And let me be the first to see your wings
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Re: You Let Me See Your Wings
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by Gothchyk on
Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 12:10:15 AM AEST
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aaawwwweee,
"You are the only one for me
And I am the only one for you
The one true love I know is you
The one perfect thing
The only thing that can make me whole
That has made me whole
And happy"
"I will never do anything to break that trust
It means more to me than anything has ever meant to anyone
That you chose to be my angel
And let me be the first to see your wings"
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Re: You Let Me See Your Wings
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by sweetangeluk on
Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 06:32:48 AM AEST
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Wow what superb words to write for your angel wife
Lovely
Love Angelxxxx |
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Re: You Let Me See Your Wings
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 04:22:39 AM AEST
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So swet-n-beautifull.
huggs emy |
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Re: You Let Me See Your Wings
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Thursday, 19th May 2005 @ 10:29:00 PM AEST
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this ones great......very hearfelt and touches my heart also wow i love the last line
"It means more to me than anything has ever meant to anyone
That you chose to be my angel
And let me be the first to see your wings" that is an beautifully written line
dont eva stop writing ill be so sad! |
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