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My brother

Contributed by iamyown on Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 11:05:48 PM in AEST
Topic: FriendshipPoetry

To my brother. The one that I love.
I raised you fom the time i could talk.
I tried to show you what no to do.You did them anyways.
I tried to protect you from any bad. Though it found you still.
Ive went through hell. So you wouldnt do it after me.
I gave my life to raise you right. ive watched you grow into the man I never could become.
It makes me happy to know that your doing great. I could live just off the smiles of your face.
It makes me feel that ive done at least one thing in my life right.
Now when i see you I stand as tall as i can knowing i didnt fail you.
You know were this next verse is from and its the way ive lived so far.
Cuz if it takes for me to suffer for my brother to see the light then give me pain till i die , but please lord treat him right. Just know you do no wrong in my eyes. i will glady lay down my life if it would cure your ale.
Cuz in you I live. Through you i feel. At any time you have sword.
Day or night or themiles between just ask and ill be there.
Cuz in your heart lies my soul and it will be this way till we get old.
The things we do and the things weve done. you say for fun.I say for you.

Copyright © iamyown ... [ 2005-05-16 23:05:48]
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Re: My brother (User Rating: 1 )
by mina-1 on Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 08:29:42 AM AEST
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This is a beautiful tribute to ur brother. Expressed so deeply and so well. He'd be so proud to have u as his brother. A beautiful touching write.
*hugs*
~sue~

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