|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Yell.
Contributed by
Butterflygirl40
on
Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 10:42:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
|
Everyday I get yelled at.
I feel like I am walking on eggshells.
I feel like a dumbbell.
I feel like I am In hell.
Cause All I do Is get yelled at.
I wished sometimes I was In a clamshell.
I wished I could go to a hotel.
My life Is nothing but getting yelled at.
I heard the doorbell.
And then I got yelled at.
I fell down cause I got yelled at.
I misspell when I get yelled at.
So I am always walking on eggshells.
Copyright ©
Butterflygirl40
... [
2005-05-16 22:42:30]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Yell.
(User Rating: 1 )
by Butterflygirl40 on
Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 07:34:59 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| come on people i know you read my poem but no comment it cant be that bad now can it lol ... plzzzzzzzzz comment me!@!!! |
|
|
Re: Yell.
(User Rating: 1 )
by sride686 on
Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 08:42:27 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Hay their you’ll get your comments just keep writing and know I enjoy your writes. Your style is very different but I can tell you write about the truth in your life. How old are you if you don’t mind me asking. Also don’t put up with being treated this way. Take care and hope to hear from you….Steve
|
|
|
Re: Yell.
(User Rating: 1 )
by secretwind on
Tuesday, 24th May 2005 @ 03:10:56 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
patience
you will get your comments |
|
|
Re: Yell.
(User Rating: 1 )
by Fears on
Tuesday, 24th May 2005 @ 09:29:57 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
this was different, but a good write. I like how you say that you are walking on egg shels like walking on hot coals. Getting yelled at is horrible. and i get yelled at alot. I hope that your egg shells will finally vanish.
Keep Writing.
~Fears |
|
|
Re: Yell.
(User Rating: 1 )
by shutterfly2004 on
Thursday, 1st December 2005 @ 12:58:33 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
This was a really good Poem!!
|
|
|
Re: Yell.
(User Rating: 1 )
by JockPhillips on
Thursday, 2nd August 2007 @ 12:29:13 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Jock Phillips too. |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
