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His Faery In a Jar
Contributed by
Gothchyk
on
Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 10:19:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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His faery in a jar
Is what I am
Watching him from a distance
He knows I’m always there
A jar of love he did create
While we sheltered each other from all the rain
Now I’m dancing on his finger
As a love ignites in our veins and lingers
The fireflies will light our path
As the stars look down from up above
He sprouts wings and we fly away
Never leaving each others side
No worries or cares
While flying high
No tears or pain
As the moon starts to rise
We look up and see the moon shining bright
Lighting up a patterned sky
We watch the unicorns so pure and white
As they bathe in the beauty that is ours
Slowly the wings disappear
And we walk free
With the wind at our backs
Basking in the twilight, as seen through our jar of love
Copyright ©
Gothchyk
... [
2005-05-16 22:19:16]
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Re: His Faery In a Jar
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by Doriens_Picture on
Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 10:59:46 PM AEST
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I really do just love this poem
muaw |
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Re: His Faery In a Jar
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by In_a_while on
Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 07:44:35 AM AEST
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| A very nice write with amazing imagery and emotion. I'm glad i read this very much! Keep em coming! |
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Re: His Faery In a Jar
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by DorianChambers on
Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 05:28:15 PM AEST
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This was beautiful as a vision in a dream . . .
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Re: His Faery In a Jar
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by wizard on
Monday, 23rd May 2005 @ 08:37:07 PM AEST
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very nice write..
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