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CrimRose
Contributed by
Rasputin_the_Second
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Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 09:36:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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Dark Double Tunnel Tense
Trickle off to Revelance
Single mind or mind to be
To blind a man or blindly see
Stark and Stern and stranger Dank
Deposit Anguish Sickly Sank
And in the light the light relinquish
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2005-05-16 21:36:39]
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Re: CrimRose
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by Jimmato on
Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 09:42:08 PM AEST
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| Thats actually not bad, reminds me of the three witches from Macbeth though whats the title's significance? |
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Re: CrimRose
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 10:25:48 PM AEST
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Intriguing.
Fast paced and brief yet efficient.
The last line was bold, intentional and creative.
Excellent write. |
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Re: CrimRose
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by Silent-No-More on
Sunday, 22nd May 2005 @ 12:15:29 AM AEST
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I'll just echo everything Romanticist said.... my thoughts exactly.
Welcome to YPDC! Keep writing/posting!
~Snemmy~ |
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