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My Mother
Contributed by
Deep_Within_My_Heart
on
Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 09:15:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
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At times life can be so cruel,
I've done all I can to try and keep my cool.
Sometimes it gets so tough I want to end my life,
Above my wrists I nervously hold the knife.
Suddenly I break down and begin to cry,
I start thinking about the ones I love,
I couldn't say goodbye.
I think of all the happy times we've had with each other,
I think of how much I love and mean to my mother.
I know I won't be just taking the life of my own,
I would of taken the life of everyone I've known.
I push the knife down pushing it aside,
Then turn around and cry.
My mom is cradeling me in her arms,
I'm still alive and she is the reason why!
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Re: My Mother
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by Man_On_High on
Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 09:28:15 PM AEST
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man what pain...
I actually envisioned everything as I read..
straight up clean with no frills...
I love this poem..
much peace to you my friend..
M.O.H. |
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Re: My Mother
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by Fears on
Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 09:38:49 PM AEST
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| I wish that every person who has the thought of suiside in there mind would read this poem. I love it and it made me cry. |
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Re: My Mother
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by Faust on
Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 10:56:02 PM AEST
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| I know how you feel. I've come pretty close to death more than once but instead of my mom i think of the only friends i have and relize i just want them to be happy even if it means living in hell. this is a Very good write. keep it up |
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Re: My Mother
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by Kuro_Mirai on
Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 09:51:05 PM AEST
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| A very emotional poem. You couldn't take your life because it would make everyone that loves you sad. It's very good. |
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