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My Distress,My fury,My rage
Contributed by
sick_n_twisted
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Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 08:47:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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I cant explain why I don’t want to die
I just cut when I’m bored
When I’m mad or sad
I’m no longer prodigious
It takes me away It satisfies my needs
I don’t know why I lack it
I hate it with a passion
I want to stop
But when the blade slashes my wrist
I feel better I don’t know why
I don’t know how
My distress, my fury, my rage
Takes all that away
Then I wipe the blood I throw away my pain
here it comes again
my distress, my fury my rage
will never go away
I try to wipe the pain
But the pain is here
to stay I cant wipe away pain
because nothing is that easy
my distress my fury my rage
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Re: My Distress,My fury,My rage
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by poet70 on
Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 08:54:58 PM AEST
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I hope you are getting help if you in fact do this, this is a very expressive poem, and very dark, and sad, is this something that goes on? If so I suggest getting help. Glad you are able to write, it helps, I know it helps me with my problems.
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Re: My Distress,My fury,My rage
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by Arden on
Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 08:59:28 PM AEST
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my, my, my ;)
everyong has a way of releasing strong emotions such as this. and sadly alot of them do it in this way. It seems to work and help, but, only for a little while, so maybe it doesnt work so well?
who knows, i'm just babbling.
poem wise, its another cutter poem to me. expressive and emotional. written well though. nice work.
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Re: My Distress,My fury,My rage
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by angel_eyes70 on
Wednesday, 12th October 2005 @ 11:37:27 AM AEST
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Nice Write, I KNow I Can't Imagine What Your Going Threw. But Im Alwways Here For You. Love Ya
*Hugs And Kisses*
Kimmy |
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