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Darkness
Contributed by
Fears
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Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 08:41:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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When the sun went down I was left with only my thoughts.
The street light outside sent an eerie glow into my room.
The dots on my ceiling played pranks on my eyes and danced around like fairies.
I heard voices from outside my window. Not nice voices, the voices of anger and hate.
The cat on my desk jumped down and disappeared into the dark pool of carpet.
We really open our eyes; When darkness falls.
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Fears
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2005-05-16 20:41:32]
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Re: Darkness
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by Fears on
Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 08:47:27 PM AEST
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hey, I wrote that above and i just realized that I miss spelt the title...it is really darkness!
sorry
~Fears~~ |
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Re: Darkness
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by Aeturos on
Sunday, 20th November 2005 @ 06:25:09 PM AEST
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It's a pretty good poem. I think all you need to do it work on the flow a bit and you'll be all set.
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