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a part of me
Contributed by
ashleigh4
on
Monday, 30th December 2002 @ 12:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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the razor's steel-so magnetic
enticing me to press inside.
my thoughts and wants are drawn upon
my blank and empty skin...
a part of me-the razor is
a part of me i hate.
for my love of pain is faltered
as the razor seals my fate...
the image in the silver
like a teardrop, like my blood
and a desolate place my mind is at
the blood and tears aflood.
this hell on earth,
with little mirth,
i try again with razor and knives-
death makes me feel alive....
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ashleigh4
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2002-12-30 12:00:00]
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Re: a part of me
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by Jayraja on
Monday, 30th December 2002 @ 12:50:59 PM AEST
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A painful write my friend. Hope all is well with you.
Love from India - Joel - |
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Re: a part of me
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 30th December 2002 @ 06:27:39 PM AEST
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Wow... I hope this one is also fictional...
Jenni |
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Re: a part of me
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by DreamsOfDark on
Monday, 30th December 2002 @ 08:05:30 PM AEST
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| I truely hope you never feel this the horrible pain, and the loss of hope. I wish you the best... |
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