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Musical Muse
Contributed by
freckle
on
Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 08:24:05 PM in AEST
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Musical Muse
I dance to
the music
in my head
The words
on paper
move me
I write
of love and loss
of hapiness
and tears
I dance
to the words
The rhythm
is so dear
Put pen to paper
and you'll see
The dance
begins
Come,
write
with me!
Carol
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freckle
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2005-05-16 20:24:05]
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Re: Musical Muse
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by Unbreakable on
Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 08:47:48 PM AEST
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This poem is so cute!! I like it so much...everything from the words in italics to the short lines and stanzas. It works with your idea so well. Good write..keep it up
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Re: Musical Muse
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by DorianChambers on
Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 09:08:40 PM AEST
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I love your style and your writting carol delicate yet poetic . . .
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Re: Musical Muse
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by MorningDove on
Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 09:18:16 PM AEST
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I truly do like this poem. It does make me want to get up and dance aroud the room to the tune it put in my head. It rather started and Irish ditty for me in my brain. Your muse was Irish, I take it?? LOL
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