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fly away

Contributed by sweetnsilentsoul on Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 08:22:25 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

i remember the call that i got
and i knew life would never be the same
someone told me that you had been shot
and i realized that this wasnt a game
i rushed right over to be by your side
and sat on the concrete where you lie
i stayed with you and held your hand as you died
i wont forget when you let out your very last sigh
i dont understand how this could happen to you
you were always there for me
and i was too late to be there for you
i know its true but i dont wanna see
i cant help but wondr what i could have done
if only i would have came
maybe i could have gotten you to run
but now i feel like im to blame
no i didnt pull the trigger
but its almost like i had
because my guilt keeps growing bigger
and deep down i feel so sad
so if you can hear me i have something to say
im sorry that i let you down i think about it every day
i wish that i could turn it around so you could be here to stay
all i want is for you to know that i love you
and im sorry that i was too late
so wait for me adn i hope that you do
so i can see you at the golden gate
well spread our wings and fly away
and no longer fell the pain that took place on that very day
ill hold your hand and let you know that i am here to stay so lets fly away fly far away to a place thats free
so me and you can lie in the clouds and just be happy youll see

Copyright © sweetnsilentsoul ... [ 2005-05-16 20:22:25]
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Re: fly away (User Rating: 1 )
by poet70 on Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 08:31:13 PM AEST
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Wow, this is a very sad poem, did this really happen, because if it did, that has to be real hard on you, and I am sorry that you are going through all that pain, at least you was able to hold his hand in the end before he pasted on. I am so sorry,
Tammi

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