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A Bright New Day
Contributed by
Zeldianus
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Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 03:53:34 PM in AEST
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The leaves are falling,
The sun is setting,
The tree stands firm and eternal.
To the ground we go,
To the world we come,
Our Mother, Our Father,
We are now separated.
We make our life,
We build our home,
The Circle of Life continues
As the New Year dawns
And the sun rises.
Your imprint and your wisdom have been
Engraved on our soul.
We shall never forget what has transpired here.
This is not the end.
New children will come,
New lives will be made,
Formed and perfected by your never-ending light.
Remember us now as we embark
On the next stage of our Journey.
Never forget the joyous times we shared together.
Cherish the memories; keep them close to your heart.
Let them brighten your day when you are feeling down.
Know that you have been loved.
Copyright ©
Zeldianus
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2005-05-16 15:53:34]
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Re: A Bright New Day
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by cocoa_butter on
Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 03:58:51 PM AEST
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| Beautiful, especially the first stanza |
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Re: A Bright New Day
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 04:22:05 PM AEST
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As a teacher, this touched me deeply.... It's good to know there are students like you out there....
Thank you for sharing this lovely poem...
Jenni |
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Re: A Bright New Day
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by OnAngelswings on
Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 04:49:19 PM AEST
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Seth...I would be very honored to get this from you if I were a teacher...any teacher would...wonderfully written!
Shari :) |
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Re: A Bright New Day
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by MorningDove on
Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 08:30:04 PM AEST
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I was so lucky growing up. I lived in a small community and we had brilliant teachers. I was encouraged all my life through school to challenge myself. Even at my age (dinosaur) I can still remember every teacher I had and even some of the weirdo profs in college. Teachers are beyond human, they are angels and heroes in my eyes. I would never have achieved in life what I did without them.
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Re: A Bright New Day
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by ForeverAlone on
Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 01:34:11 AM AEST
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Seth, I told you this is an amazing piece, So well written in every sense and just breath takeing...I really have nothing else to say...I was looking for something meaningful to say, but I can't think of anything to do this justice...Great Job my friend, as always
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Re: A Bright New Day
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by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 08:15:59 PM AEST
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Wow Seth...this is really deep...your expression is excellent in this piece...Well done!
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