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Love Sonnet II
Contributed by
cocoa_butter
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Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 03:39:20 PM in AEST
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Three eloquent words that I often utter
Could never do justice to what I mean.
Feelings surpass the riches of gold and myrrh,
It is a wealth which will remain unseen.
Neither angels nor demons can dissever
Myself from yours for I belong to you.
My love for you, immortal forever,
One which nobody could ever subdue.
My heart feels neglected, alone and mute
Unless it is trembling with your presence.
Almost though the arrow Eros once did shoot,
Did pierce my chest with an ache so intense.
A rose is said to be twin to a thorn,
But love like this could never turn to scorn.
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Re: Love Sonnet II
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 04:10:52 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC.... Hope to see more of your work here.
I especially liked these lines....
"Three eloquent words that I often utter
Could never do justice to what I mean.
Feelings surpass the riches of gold and myrrh,
It is a wealth which will remain unseen."
Jenni
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Re: Love Sonnet II
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by Vampirequeen on
Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 05:06:49 PM AEST
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Welcome to ypdc.
You will love being here .
anyways you say this is your first write?
Amazing.I like this part the most.
My love for you, immortal forever,
One which nobody could ever subdue.
My heart feels neglected, alone and mute
Unless it is trembling with your presence.
very well done. |
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Re: Love Sonnet II
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by Spike on
Friday, 25th November 2005 @ 07:39:00 PM AEST
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A good start to many more posts, I'm sure. If you are this much in love, then I both pity and envy you.
I'm also very impressed by anyone who can find a poetic use for words like 'dissever'!
Spike |
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