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They came to life one day....
Contributed by
LOWMAN613
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Monday, 30th December 2002 @ 09:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
ChildrensPoetry
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As I layed in bed one night,
I heard a little noise,
I opened my eyes to see such a sight,
What I heard was one of my toys,
I sat there watching them at play,
much to my surprise,
All my toys came to life one day,
I could'nt believe my eyes,
There goes Mickey dancing all around,
Minnie joined him too,
My army men were hitting the ground,
careful in what they do,
now I see Scooby driving a car,
he's cruising all over the floor,
and my blue Teddy,thinks he's a star,
when everyone asks him to sing more,
Theres my Robot trying to chat,
telling all what he knows,
Mr.Potatoe Head has lost his hat,
and maybe even his nose,
Is this all a dream to me,
as real as it may seem,
how could this really be?
It's got to be a dream!
Copyright ©
LOWMAN613
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2002-12-30 09:30:00]
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Re: They came to life one day....
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by Jayraja on
Monday, 30th December 2002 @ 10:06:07 AM AEST
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This is beautiful Chris, Children would love it. Only Y'day the movie " Little Soldiers" was shown in HBO here in India.
You are doing great. I am new here and will be reading more of your works later in the new year.
Happy New Year from India - Joel - |
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Re: They came to life one day....
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Monday, 30th December 2002 @ 10:06:22 AM AEST
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| what a wonderful memory to have, you'll have to put that in a memory book for him, thanks Christina |
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Re: They came to life one day....
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by Mystery_Girl on
Monday, 30th December 2002 @ 04:56:25 PM AEST
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| hehehe this is cute...reminds of the movie Toy Story......kids have great imaginations dont they........a nice write....take care...tanya......:-) |
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Re: They came to life one day....
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 30th December 2002 @ 06:13:04 PM AEST
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Awww..lovely write, Christina... this is something the boys will cherish when they get older..
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: They came to life one day....
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by Ilhar on
Monday, 30th December 2002 @ 08:47:19 PM AEST
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| great write i enjoyed it very much...your son will love it when he gets older |
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Re: They came to life one day....
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by Cynthia on
Tuesday, 31st December 2002 @ 07:03:35 AM AEST
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| This poem is cute. It's great that our kids have a good imagination. *S* Cynthia |
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