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Bottomless Pit
Contributed by
bethers_is_my_baby
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Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 11:14:19 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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a bottomless pit of sorrow
a bottomless pit of hate
a bottomless pit of depair
this is my only fate
my soul is nothing but a bottomless pit
my heart turned cold and black
and theres nothing you can do to change it
nothing you can do to take it back
to take back all the pain youve caused me
to take back the tears ive cried
to take back the bottomless pit youve made
nothing can take back all your lies.
a bottomless pit of sorrow
a bottomless pit of hate
a bottomless pit of depair
because of you this is my fate
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Re: Bottomless Pit
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by ruthie1983 on
Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 12:13:47 PM AEST
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| interesting write. hopefully u will be able to work it all out. good job! |
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Re: Bottomless Pit
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by candysears on
Friday, 4th November 2005 @ 04:38:57 PM AEST
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Great write...
We grieve thru all the pain we go thru..
But as thay say, this to shall pass away..
Tomorrow will bring a happier day...
God Bless!
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Re: Bottomless Pit
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by zalzool on
Thursday, 10th November 2005 @ 08:41:02 PM AEST
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Good write
i know how it feels
but things will only get better
i hope ...
tc
ZAL |
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