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Sick heart Swallow
Contributed by
In_a_While
on
Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 10:47:29 AM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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beating drums, i'm lost in sun
wandering dreams, lead to seams
torn before the stormy morn'...
swaying trees, do threaten me
i stumble through what's left of true
she was my dawn but now all gone...
the rolling clouds, that make no sounds
sick pill swallow death should follow
i close my eyes to bad dream lies...
light through trees, she's my disease
i wish i could, be oh so good
instead i'm grey with nothing to say...
she's my aching, heart's bone breaking
i taste her memory lost in my every
day gone by.... day gone by...
so until later...
i paint some trees, i'm lost but free
i taint the leaves blue from me
from thoughts in me, i set words free...
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Re: Sick heart Swallow
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by shelby on
Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 03:28:12 PM AEST
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I liked how you compared emotions with nature and storms I paint the leaves blue from me so strong
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Re: Sick heart Swallow
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by Man_On_High on
Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 10:02:00 PM AEST
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this has a very dream like quality to it...
I jus floated through the whole read!
very well written..
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