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here i am
Contributed by
edward_jarvis2000
on
Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 10:46:49 AM in AEST
Topic:
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here i am,
look at me,
you judge me on my outer layer,
why dont you take the time,
get to know me,
then judge me,
take the time peel off my layers,
one at a time,
after that,
tell me why you judged me,
like that,
here i am,
look at me
what do you see now??
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Re: here i am
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by Archie on
Thursday, 19th May 2005 @ 12:52:27 AM AEST
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| I see a hurting person who seems to not have many friends and I wonder if he sees the ones he has. |
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Re: here i am
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by Drapes on
Sunday, 16th April 2006 @ 08:14:32 PM AEST
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That's really good and exactly how I feel. You're not alone. Good write,
Drapes |
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