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thats how you get that lonely
Contributed by
brokenwings
on
Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 07:06:44 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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the knife is by my side
the blood runs from my wrist
i am dying and dont care anymore
then the song plays
talking about sucide and asked
"how do you get that lonely"
its not about being lonely my heart says
its about not being able to get back up
its not being lonely that kills
its being refuse and rejected
told that some trashy thing
has your man...
so the song asked how do you get that lonely
so i stood up and found my will to fight
i wrote down these words
its not about being lonely
its about being cold
lonely something we can live through
but seeing her with him
made me want to die
but your song made me try
i'd rather be lonely
than see her with him...
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2005-05-16 07:06:44]
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Re: thats how you get that lonely
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 07:33:22 AM AEST
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oh MY GOD>>> i can relate to this SOOO much
its so sad and i kno excactly how u feel....seeing the one you love so much with a pathetic person...oh its the most painful thing u can go through
well done, i felt the pain within this poem n im glad u didnt go thru with it......and i agree with every word
plz keep hope, all my love |
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Re: thats how you get that lonely
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by wolfman on
Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 10:11:43 PM AEST
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this was a truly sad poem, it spoke true from the core and made me feel for you. the words used in this poem were used properly and made the heart show through. your pain is shown through and is felt by many, your not alone in you suffering, take heart it wont last forever (dont let these feeling rule your life)
I know why you are going through and just know that you are right its not about being lonly, (we wish it was that easy) but to an end its not... this was a very good poem I to have herd that song and evey time I do it makes me sad to think that it will be what people think of when they see of hear about us. I will pray for you to be able to get through this pain. be strong and God bless
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Re: thats how you get that lonely
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by imsorryulied on
Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 08:20:05 PM AEST
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| after all he put you through i guess i can understand how you can get that heart broken, swore he loved you and turned on you in an instant over nothing but lies. you deserve so much better than him. please dont' get that hurt again... |
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