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Sometimes
Contributed by
Jaycee
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Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 05:02:35 AM in AEST
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Sometimes you miss it
when its standing right near
Sometimes you're confused
when the truth is so clear
Sometimes you're still looking
when the goal's within reach
Sometimes the lesson's lost
when you refuse what she teach
(... er teaches, but it doesn't work that way :)
Sometines your heart breaks
when the loneliness cries
Sometimes you overlook it
and part of you dies
Sometimes you're confused
when you don't know what you want
Sometimes you go nuts
at your insanity's taunt
Sometimes isn't always
all though sometimes it should be
Sometimes isn't enough
when it should be surely
So know I know
what must be done today
Cast off my doubt
there is only one way
I want to be with you
and watch lightsaber flix
Will you go out with me
ms. leia36?
Copyright ©
Jaycee
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2005-05-16 05:02:35]
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Re: Sometimes
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by Rae on
Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 06:53:03 AM AEST
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aww...
Sometimes you miss it
when its standing right near
Sometimes you're confused
when the truth is so clear
so true.
good luck with ms. leia36! :D |
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Re: Sometimes
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 07:23:53 AM AEST
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AWWW (((((((((Jaycee,)))))))))))
I am speechless, this poem is just beautiful!! I love it!! and in reference to the last verse...the force is with you !! I would love too!!!
Leia |
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Re: Sometimes
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by mina-1 on
Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 07:37:30 AM AEST
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Aww how sweet. I'm so happy 4 u 2. No beautiful person than Ms Leia36.
Leia I couldn't be happier for u darls. Bless ur heart and may u have a wonderful relationship with Jaycee. Good luck u 2. I'm ever so happy for u both.
love 'n' hugs
~sue~ |
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Re: Sometimes
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by blue_angel on
Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 10:30:12 AM AEST
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aww that is so cute! a great write, wonderfully written... im so happy for u 2! see, now we both got shot by cupids arrow... creepy huh? sending sum luck,
jennie* |
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Re: Sometimes
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by mylady on
Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 10:30:36 AM AEST
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| It so nice!. great poem. |
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Re: Sometimes
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 01:04:35 PM AEST
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Awww my friend, I see not only have you found your calling, you have also found something else *wink*
Best of everything to you and Leia...
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: Sometimes
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by MorningDove on
Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 02:12:50 PM AEST
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This is delightful and I do hope she says 'yes'. Sometimes we just can't see the forest for the trees.
Smiles,
Rita |
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Re: Sometimes
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by JasTrask_22 on
Saturday, 6th May 2006 @ 11:39:28 PM AEST
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a wonderful poem that is well thought out.. it makes you tihnk.. and there was a nice twist at the end of it.. i really didn't see that coming!!! ... well have fun you two, i think its cute!!
jasmine - - |
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