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A poem to my first love
Contributed by
socialmisfit
on
Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 03:05:46 AM in AEST
Topic:
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ohh my first love
what have i done to you?
you promised me the heavens above
i promised my soul to you
i said many things
promised to follow your lead
to listen and learn
and make myself worthy of the price to be free
now i lock you away
I weep and cry every night.
i forget to share your love
and i denounce you every time things aren't right
dear bride please forgive me
i have walked astray
i have forgotten you my savior
but you never forgot me
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Re: A poem to my first love
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by emystar on
Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 03:16:36 AM AEST
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Very impressive write.
A masterpeice.
huggs,
emy
Thank god he never forgets us. |
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Re: A poem to my first love
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by Vampirequeen on
Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 03:24:36 AM AEST
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| WOW WHAT A AWSOME WRITE. |
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Re: A poem to my first love
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by venkat on
Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 03:39:11 AM AEST
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| Ending lines are superb....beauty and anguish are poured forth in the lines.."dear bride please forgive me i have walked astray..I have forgotten you my savior..but you never forgot me".. per chance she reads these lines..:-) venkat |
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