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My sacrificial ground
Contributed by
venkat
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Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 12:28:43 AM in AEST
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Except you there is nothing
Except you I don’t want any thing
The secret of life lies in your dancing feet
Thou destroyer of death, O nectarine light,
Dweller of the burning ground in my heart
All sounds and thoughts have I sacrificed
Aversions and attachments destroyed
Anger and passions reduced to ashes
My ego lies there as a corpse of silence
In the flames of eternal consciousness!
Except you none can stay there!
Except you none can dance there!
Art thou the light of existence absolute
Dancing in the burning ground
As blazing truth that exists every where
In the splendorous flames of the sun
In the wondrous beauty of the moon
In the stars and lights of the skies
Even in the black holes of cosmic vast
Which bring death to the stars of night-
Thou exist in the millions of constellations
Blaze as purest jewel of consciousness-
O mother KaaLika! O thou, supreme light!
Art thou the existence absolute, infinite
Dancing in the flames of consciousness
In the sacrificial ground of my heart!
.........
16-5-2005
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Re: My sacrificial ground
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by MorningDove on
Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 12:44:09 AM AEST
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Your words always touch a spot in my soul that needs nourishing. My venerated friend, this is a brilliant piece of work.
Peace,
Rita |
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by emystar on
Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 01:07:01 AM AEST
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Wow my dear friend, this is awesome.
Leave it to u to find the beauty in all things.
a masterpeice of great beauty.
This write makes one wonna dance and envy the one it's intended for.
You may take time for you to come up with the new but then they are all worth waiting for.
U r a great scholar-n-poet.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: My sacrificial ground
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by Vampirequeen on
Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 01:30:27 AM AEST
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| Like i said time and time again your poetry is out of this world.amazing awsome. |
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Re: My sacrificial ground
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by SocialMisfit on
Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 03:17:06 AM AEST
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profound, such beauty in the shape of words pour from your pen, its amazing how you sculpt words into a vision i am just awe struck.
SM |
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Re: My sacrificial ground
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by mina-1 on
Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 07:01:42 AM AEST
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Dearest Venkat u r a truly talented poet who captures the beauty of everything he writes about. A heavenly divine master piece as only u can write it my friend. Incredibly remarkable. A delightful and pleasant write as always. No one comes in ur class dear Venkat. You top us all.
*hugs*
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Re: My sacrificial ground
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by lovingcritters on
Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 01:43:31 AM AEST
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Such a beautiful Word Master my kind Sir, Venkat..........this one is no expection! Filled to the brim with life and refreshing feelings and loving thoughts. Where did you get all of those beauteous words you use lots and lots?
Warm Poetic love
consue |
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Re: My sacrificial ground
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by kalika_vidya on
Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 02:17:27 AM AEST
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| Very exquisitely written..a divine flower of poetic flavor.. |
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Re: My sacrificial ground
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 23rd May 2005 @ 06:04:22 AM AEST
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Another amazing write, my friend... I don't know how you do it every time! But you never fail to disappoint the reader...
Thank you..
(((((hugs)))))
Jenni |
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Re: My sacrificial ground
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by NoSaint on
Tuesday, 24th May 2005 @ 06:09:54 AM AEST
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Once more you lift the spirits and touch the heart with your tapestry of words
Shari |
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by reflections on
Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 10:14:39 AM AEST
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A wonderful tribute to the fire of life within you, and to the special feeling of content felt by a loving heart when such an accolade is offered. May peace, prosperity, and long life be among your most cherished rewards.
John
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Re: My sacrificial ground
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 03:40:56 PM AEST
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Wow...well done!
Very inspirational! |
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Re: My sacrificial ground
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 06:38:19 PM AEST
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venkat this is so lovely, breathtakingy beautiful and flowing in words and hearts:)
hugs n' love nessa
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Re: My sacrificial ground
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by lostinmyself on
Friday, 3rd June 2005 @ 03:55:17 PM AEST
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This is stunning Venkat.
You write with grace and beauty few poets here can match.
This is a gorgeous write, with a fantastic flow and lovely words.
Great write,
*hugs* Phil xxx |
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Re: My sacrificial ground
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 4th June 2005 @ 08:00:12 PM AEST
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Idyllic
Energetic and vibrant
A colourful piece, indeed.
“Nectarine light”
And what beautiful comparisons:
“Dweller of the burning ground in my heart”
Spiritual…almost Buddhist/Hindu (in inclination)?
“All sounds and thoughts have I sacrificed”
This is an interesting concept…to surrender to a higher plane of intangible richness…love and truth.
And the side affects of love!
“My ego lies there as a corpse of silence”
“Black holes of cosmic vast”
-Breath-taking.
“Blaze as purest jewel of consciousness”
-Mind altering!
“In the flames of eternal consciousness!”
-Soul engorging.
Thank you for this experience.
A valuable one, indeed.
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Re: My sacrificial ground
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by Arden on
Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 12:20:26 AM AEST
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i've missed reading your pieces of work my friend.
this, like all your other work, is truely perfection.
as always, i'm impressed.
-Rebekah |
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Re: My sacrificial ground
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by bobotheclown on
Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 12:42:53 AM AEST
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Its been too long since I read anything by you
Venkat and somehow its posting escaped
me until now. I loved the first two lines the
sense of unfilment if you can't have that
person... I can definitely relate to that.
"Anger and passions reduced to ashes
My ego lies there as a corpse of silence"
A stunning write filled with intense emotions.
I loved it my friend.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: My sacrificial ground
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by blowfish_jane on
Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 07:58:38 AM AEST
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What a magical poem Venkat. Your poems are so refreshingly new. I simply adore this.
Jane xoxo |
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Re: My sacrificial ground
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 18th June 2005 @ 11:35:09 PM AEST
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| from each line it just kept getting better and better. this is one of my favorite of yours also =] |
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Re: My sacrificial ground
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by Avarice_Riot on
Monday, 20th June 2005 @ 05:46:05 AM AEST
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| As always, you create yet another portrait of beauty that blows me away and brings me to other worlds. Kudos. :) |
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Re: My sacrificial ground
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 9th July 2005 @ 10:08:03 PM AEST
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Your writing gives me wisdom
I had to get dicitonary out for this one
and that great I'm learning from your knowledge so keep it up for my brains sake
great writing 5+ |
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Re: My sacrificial ground
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by Elizabeth_Dandy on
Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 10:51:11 AM AEST
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Venerable poet dear Venkat Sir, l
Voila! - the last commenter. whose accolade must by existential necessity be rather modest, as diverse syntaxes, grammars, and vocabularies are engaged constantly in a war.
and make it very difficult to do justice to masterworks of incomparable beauty and sublime content, - but the supreme "Dancing Lord" is aware of these limitations , and so I bow and give joyous thanks to Him for bestowing upon you such a multitude of rarest and most excellent gifts.for the benefit of men.
Be blessed!
Elizabeth
So great gifts |
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Re: My sacrificial ground
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by Archie on
Monday, 8th August 2005 @ 07:41:23 AM AEST
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| This is amazing. This poem and your poem "Land of dreams" are very inspiring to read. You pour a lot of spiritual referance into your poems and it show that your writing is led by a force bigger than you. I have a greater respect for you each time I read a poem by you. (Thanks for giving us vision and hope) |
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Re: My sacrificial ground
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by thumper on
Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 01:24:43 AM AEST
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This is, so far, my favorite. When I yearn for good poetry, I come to your site. You inspire me, but alas, I know I will never write as well as you. Kudos dear friend. You deserve all the praise that you recieve and more.
Friend
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Re: My sacrificial ground
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by Wachumiri on
Wednesday, 28th September 2005 @ 04:20:10 AM AEST
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There are few poets on this site that, I believe, have reached perfection in their writing, and you are one of them. You create awesome (In it's original sense) visuals. You control the reader's mind with your words.
Well done.
Take care.
David |
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Re: My sacrificial ground
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by Bizzy on
Tuesday, 27th December 2005 @ 09:49:42 PM AEST
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Dear Venkat, this is truly beautiful worship from your heart. You paint a vision in words for us. I have felt awe much as you describe, but, perhaps, without the depth and beauty that you have experienced. Bless you.
Friend Bizzy |
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Re: My sacrificial ground
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by myheartsvoice on
Monday, 12th February 2007 @ 12:23:20 PM AEST
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Poetic beauty in it's truest karma. A vision of celestial versatility you have weaved into a murel of truly beautiful literary art work, for the heart and soul alike.
myheartsvoice
and thank you kindly for your comment and readership as well. |
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Re: My sacrificial ground
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 5th January 2009 @ 03:47:58 PM AEST
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Wow, this one is somewhat bittersweet. Very powerful lines of undying devoted love with lines that also bring some darkness.... darkness that also expresses that undying love.
These lines My ego lies there as a corpse of silence
In the flames of eternal consciousness!
Too cool.
Very nicely done.
Tim
:-)
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Re: My sacrificial ground
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by shelby on
Sunday, 18th January 2009 @ 10:28:13 PM AEST
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Venkat,
I see I have missed some of your beautiful poetry.
My words do little justice to the feeling and inspiration I feel while reading this.
I am so happy that you are back with us.
Hugs my friend
Michelle |
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