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Rhapsody of the heart...
Contributed by
mina-1
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Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 12:26:44 AM in AEST
Topic:
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The sun umbraes the moon
The sky blanketed with stars
As I look up to the sky
The stars shimmer way up far
The wind blows gently
Orchids scents aflow
The lush aroma transcending
As the stars lumiously glow
The whispering wind plays a tune
A soothing rhapsody to my heart
It lulls in your tranquil voice
Caressing my hearts every part
I close my eyes and dream
I'm in your loving arms
You serenade my heart
With your loving charm
The tranquilty in the air
As I make love to you
Passions over load
With a love so true
I open up my eyes
Your voice slowly fades away
Well into the star lit sky
Until the very next day
Crickets hop on by
Cats prowl well into the night
I lay amidst the orchid blooms
The aroma a transcending delight
I await with anticipation
Each and everyday
To hear my heart's rhapsody
In the wind gently play...
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Re: Rhapsody of the heart...
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by venkat on
Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 12:41:13 AM AEST
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Sweet yearning of heart..its a rhapsody of love that you dreamt..so beautifully written
Oh..its a lovely write..delightful. :-) venkat |
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Re: Rhapsody of the heart...
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by MorningDove on
Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 12:48:39 AM AEST
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Your voice whispers so sweetly of passionate yearnings of your heart, body and soul. A dreamlike state sustains you till you fulfill these yearnings.
Beautiful,
Rita |
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Re: Rhapsody of the heart...
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by ForeverAlone on
Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 01:16:39 AM AEST
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This is so Beautiful Sue, your writes always give me warm feelings..Great job as always
~Clark |
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Re: Rhapsody of the heart...
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by Vampirequeen on
Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 01:31:23 AM AEST
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| very sweet. |
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Re: Rhapsody of the heart...
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by jmpy84 on
Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 01:32:50 AM AEST
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| wonderfully done great job |
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Re: Rhapsody of the heart...
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by emystar on
Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 01:39:34 AM AEST
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heavenly beautifull masterpeice.
huggs,
emy
Thanks for asking 'bout me while I was gone.
I missed ya'll too. |
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Re: Rhapsody of the heart...
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by Man_On_High on
Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 01:46:56 AM AEST
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this stanza is so ..$#@!.. moving-
"Crickets hop on by
Cats prowl well into the night
I lay amidst the orchid blooms
The aroma a transcending delight"
I wish I had this in a painting...ya know
awesome imagery..
M.O.H. |
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Re: Rhapsody of the heart...
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by loveisendless on
Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 02:01:10 AM AEST
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A truely romantic & crystal clear vision of love!
You hear as if you feel,& let me tell you dear it's all very real!! Love is like a lust,filled with please upon every rush!!! You're the very core of my heart,so pour on the passion to get it to start!!!! A great & very deserving piece of art,
only words paint the picture,in every little part!!!!! A 5 *****!!!!!!
Lots Of Love,
DAN!!!!!!! |
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Re: Rhapsody of the heart...
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by sride686 on
Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 04:00:45 AM AEST
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| Sue this was a very beautiful write and it had so much love in it. Your choice of vocabulary was very good and it flowed really well. Thank you for sharing another good write and its good to see some more lovey dovey work from you. This poem really drew me in and it almost seems like your remembering a love or imagining being with someone you don’t have. Its really a sad write in a way to me but you can tell me if I’m interpreting it wrong. I to know how this feels and maybe its just my feelings changing this write to be sad in my own mind. You’re a good friend Sue and I hope all is well with you. I’m in my own struggle and it seems when things start going right something new comes into my world to mess things up again. I’ve been sad these last few days myself so you’ll be in my prayers as I ask that I’m in yours. Take care my friend Sue….Steve |
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Re: Rhapsody of the heart...
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by blowfish_jane on
Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 04:42:19 AM AEST
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Sue, this was such a delightful read. An excellent way of sharing a dream or perhaps a wish.
I love the sweetness of this write. Well done.
Jane xxx |
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Re: Rhapsody of the heart...
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 07:52:57 AM AEST
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| lovely poem well constructed, you have a wonderful talent Sue so don't waste it,Or I ll come and paddle yer butt,,,this man salutes you,, |
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Re: Rhapsody of the heart...
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by shelby on
Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 01:27:54 PM AEST
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lovely write Sue this was like a melody
Michelle |
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Re: Rhapsody of the heart...
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by DorianChambers on
Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 02:59:15 PM AEST
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Such delicate emotions played in harmony as one would play an instrument of the heart
so devine and in usual form . . .
Dorian Chambers |
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Re: Rhapsody of the heart...
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 04:36:49 PM AEST
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A few words come to mind after reading this-
Wispy, Dreamy, Passionate, Romantic... wow.. I think I'll stop here..
Absloutely loved this....
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: Rhapsody of the heart...
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by sweetangeluk on
Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 09:58:03 AM AEST
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Beautiful melody of love.
Fantastic
Love Angelxxx |
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Re: Rhapsody of the heart...
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by somedaylove on
Thursday, 19th May 2005 @ 04:55:17 PM AEST
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| beautiful write the words flowed so well..........I felt as thou i was watching a picture of passion as it was being pianted.........keep up the great work |
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