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FIRST PERSON
Contributed by
kydistortion69
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Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 12:19:03 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I watched as the sky dripped into the land
I watches as its scars brought fire to the ground
I watched as the clouds burned black with ash
I watched as the ground drew flame to the sky
I ran as the rocks crumbled where I stood
I ran as the flames grew higher and higher
I ran as the smoke choked out the air
I ran as the sky rained acid down
I cried as the earth transformed to horror
I cried as the life fell dead all around
I cried as the red blaze took over the earth
And I cried at the hell that was now my life
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2005-05-16 00:19:03]
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Re: FIRST PERSON
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by evilfairy on
Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 10:04:10 PM AEST
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| another great write kydistortion69 |
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Re: FIRST PERSON
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by freckle on
Friday, 4th November 2005 @ 06:20:34 PM AEST
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| Wow....sounds like the end of the world! Good imagery. The flow is a little redundant but I think the imagery helps draw away from that. I enjoyed reading this....thanks. |
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Re: FIRST PERSON
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by DreamPoetess on
Sunday, 6th November 2005 @ 12:14:02 AM AEST
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| visual:> I would be running, screaming, hope your life turns around, I really do:> |
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