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become what I am
Contributed by
tres_estrellas
on
Sunday, 15th May 2005 @ 11:43:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
mystical
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Sometimes I want to be
someone who I'm not
I feel like I'm slipping
from this cold reality
I want to bask in sunlight
but it only ever rains
I feel my world
caving in
burying me
I want to have a portrait
but no one understands
I want to express myself
but no one looks deep enough
I want to show them who I am
but they don't see things how I do
I'm too different
to be part of this world
I'm not from this world
I want to go back
to where I came from
I want to become
what I used to be
I want to become
Divine Light
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tres_estrellas
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2005-05-15 23:43:11]
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Re: become what I am
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by Sinned on
Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 10:56:08 AM AEST
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Tres
You sure have a knac for writing.
I could use some of your talent.
This is a lovely poem,but alas you will never be Devine.
I believe that is left for our creator alone.
Please post more asyou have much to offer.
Sinned
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Re: become what I am
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by sararose1950 on
Sunday, 6th November 2005 @ 12:41:44 PM AEST
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| lovely- we are all children of the light- part of our creator-Peace and Light |
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