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Falling Into Hell
Contributed by
Live2Die
on
Sunday, 15th May 2005 @ 10:58:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Falling now,
Out of hands reach.
Grasping now,
This can’t be real.
Falling down,
Down the well.
Crashing down,
To an unknown hell.
Screaming now,
There must be help.
Whispering now,
For hope is dying.
Falling down,
Down the well.
Crashing down,
To an unknown hell.
Non-existent now,
No longer can I be seen.
Invisible now,
All features hidden.
Falling down,
Down the well.
Crashing down,
To an unknown hell.
Not believing,
For you just turned away.
Not understanding,
How could you leave this way?
Falling down,
Down the well.
Crashing down,
To an unknown hell.
Copyright ©
Live2Die
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2005-05-15 22:58:47]
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Re: Falling Into Hell
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by kydistortion69 on
Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 12:37:25 AM AEST
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| love this poem in all its emotionally frantic proclamation. very good poem. |
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Re: Falling Into Hell
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by Vampirequeen on
Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 01:46:03 AM AEST
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Dark and very sad.
awsome job. |
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Re: Falling Into Hell
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by high_on_duct_tape on
Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 04:54:56 PM AEST
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| wow, this one's great. very expressive. bleh, y do u think ur a bad writer? grr |
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