|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Realm Of Cracking Souls
Contributed by
secretwind
on
Sunday, 15th May 2005 @ 10:37:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
|
Telling tales
classic stories
Hiding behind illusions
deceiving with confusion,
Justify loving justify hate
emotionally infecting
anyone who comes your way.
I am blinded by the glare
as you float
and your halo glows...
a legend in your own mind
and you let everybody know.
you are
controlling me
I'm addicted to your game
you feed off my pain
laugh as I bleed.
On a carousel to hell
under your spell
you got a hold of my soul
you will never set me free.
I think that it is sad
you never hear a word said
when you smile
I wish you were dead,
burning bridges
giving deadly kisses
you raise your tail and hiss....
you're a cartoon character
and you make me sick.
The master of disaster
slowly losing your mind
always undercover
never looking anyone in the eye,
your carousel I ride
spins
a nightmare so deep
I can feel my soul slowly crack
as you demonically torment me.....
Copyright ©
secretwind
... [
2005-05-15 22:37:21]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Realm Of Cracking Souls
(User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on
Sunday, 15th May 2005 @ 10:44:15 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Deep, deep, deep, sad, sad, sad but written extremly well.
I wish u the best in all things.
Hope u feel better really soon.
hugs,
emy |
|
|
Re: Realm Of Cracking Souls
(User Rating: 1 )
by kydistortion69 on
Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 12:40:35 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| a very intense poem I love it . it is so full of emotion and metaphor. |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
