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ALWAYS MOURNING
Contributed by
SPOKENWORDARTIST
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Sunday, 15th May 2005 @ 10:13:37 PM in AEST
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REMINESSING OVER CHILDHOOD LAUGTHER AND MEMORIES REMEMBERED.
MOMENTS THAT MADE BEING PROUD SPECTACULAR IN HER CARING EYES.
SKINED KNEE AND WATERY EYES WITNESS MOMENTS OF LOVE SO TENDER THAT ALL PAIN SEEM TO MELT AWAY.
FATHER, BROTHER, BEST FRIEND, ADVISOR, COUNSLER, AND THE STRENGTH OF A THOUSAND MEN ARE HER CHARACTER.
HER ABSENCE IS THE PAIN OF MEMORIES I SHED TEARS FOR AND THE FACE I STROKE LOVING IN MY MIND, I SPEAK AND SHE LISTENS HER PRESENCE LIVES ON IN MY SIBLING FEATURES.
SINGLE PARENT WASN’T HER TITLE IN THE EYES OF HER OWN SHE CALLS MY NAME IN A WHISPER OF CONCUSNESS TO SAY I’M STILL HERE FOR YOU MY SON.
I STRIVE ON IN THE WORDS OF HER VOICE MY HEART LONGS TO HEAR ONCE AGAIN.
I HATE WHAT FATE MAKES ME ACCEPT EVERYDAY SHE’S BEEN GONE FROM OUR EARTHLY HOME….
WITH THE LOST OF MY MOTHER I’M ALWAYS MOURNING.
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Re: ALWAYS MOURNING
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Sunday, 15th May 2005 @ 10:27:32 PM AEST (User
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And I know your Mom is smilen down on you and very proud of you.
this masterpeice is sad but a great tribute to any mother, yes, even in heaven.
Very touching write.
huggs,
emy
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Re: ALWAYS MOURNING
(User Rating: 1 ) by Live2Die on
Sunday, 15th May 2005 @ 10:53:45 PM AEST (User
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Beutiful poem, but get rid of caps. They turned a wonderful, strong poem into an onrush of anger. Checkout some of my writing, if you wish |
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